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"What? Me? Fatter?" I'm on a diet and can't suddenly get big just because someone wants me to!"

"Well, Corny? Now you are gonna get big!" I'm sorry to do this to you but a price has to be paid."

I never thought that she was THAT revenge hungry but when she did, she was completely insane. So where do you think that the table with the food is? Well, it's right in front of me. And there it was filled with cookies. Really sugarsweet ones in fact. At first i was reluctant and wanted to resist the smell. But i had to eat one anyway. Before i would put one in my mourh, i was thinking "Meh! It's just a cookie. How can i get hooked by this one." But i was wrong, after i ate the first cookie. I was obsessed of the cookies. So i ate, and ate, and ate and ate and ate, which gave me a fun and odd feeling in my body. I was getting fatter!!! My chin was starting to get really soft and add in a double chin. My own belly was already soft and exposed. And i was like "Eeeeww" "Look at me!" and after that my breasts was getting bigger too. Even my butt was getting so big. Merill really wanted a payback for what i did to her. After i ate all the cookies, i was now 10 times bigger than Irma. All i was thinking to myself was "Please let me go! Let me go!!!"

"So, Cornelia, will you apologize to me about the things you said about me when we were kids?"

"I will, i will' just let me go, please? I'm sorry for calling you pathetic." I pleaded.

"All right, Corny!" i'll let you go."

She then walked to me and tied off the ropes on the chair.

Okay, so after she let me go, we started to be more friendlier to each other. But i decided to go back home. And that was the story about Merill's sweet revenge. I hope you enjoyed it.

Bye Bye. The end.
The revenge if Merill part 2 point commissioned by fatdarkelves.
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GRT1392 Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Yes, do Cornelia a favor, make her a huge bloated blond bbw
Holophite Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013   General Artist
Interesting yarn!
VioletWillBaud Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2013
okay, but lacks a bit of drama and cruelty, but overall I like
HannaPossumPaws Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Hi, I got your note, but it didn't seem complete, it was cut of at "the boy in the" and I wasn't able to click the link. I did, however, look up Chris Lair and Lillian Hale. Ill definitely do it, I just need to know their ages, and a link to an original picture if the too.
Keep in touch :)
Hillygon Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2013
7-9 years old. There are some fan-art of these 2.
HannaPossumPaws Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Ok :)
FatDarkElves Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012
That was awesome :D
Nice, short, and SWEET :D
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